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Task 1

Lucius

give us the proudest prisoner of the Goths                                                                                                         give us the queen of the Goths                                                                                                                              that we may hew his limbs, and on a pile                                                                                                          that we should remove his limbs                                                                                                                       ad manes fratrum sacrifice his flesh                                                                                                                   and we should sacrifice his flesh                                                                                                                         before this earthy prison of their bones                                                                                                             before we take the bones                                                                                                                                  that so the shadows be not unappeased                                                                                                         the shadows are calling for it                                                                                                                             nor we disturb’d with prodigies on earth                                                                                                              we also call for it

Titus Andronicus

I give him you the noblest that survives                                                                                                                I give him to you                                                                                                                                                 the eldest son of this distressed queen                                                                                                                the eldest son of this distressed queen

Tamora

stay Roman brethren gracious conqueror                                                                                                         dear gracious conqueror                                                                                                                                     victorious Titus rue the tears I shed                                                                                                                     Titus have sorrow for my tears                                                                                                                              a mother’s tears in passion of her son                                                                                                                 I am in tears for my son                                                                                                                                       and if thy sons were ever dear to thee                                                                                                              and my sons are close to me                                                                                                                            sufficeth not that we brought to Rome                                                                                                                we were not brought to Rome to die                                                                                                                   to beautify thy triumphs and return                                                                                                                      we were brought to show you won                                                                                                                     captive to thee and to thy Roman yoke                                                                                                              captured by you and by the soldiers of Rome                                                                                                   but must my son be slaughter’d in the streets                                                                                                    but should my son die in the streets                                                                                                                  for valiant doings in their’s country’s cause                                                                                                         for doing courageous things for your country                                                                                                        o if to fight for king and commonweal                                                                                                                  do you fight for king or for the people                                                                                                                  were piety in thine it is in these                                                                                                                           were you religious in your choice                                                                                                                         Andronicus stain not thy tomb with blood                                                                                                            don’t stain the tomb with blood                                                                                                                            wilt thou draw near the nature of the gods?                                                                                                         will you draw near the nature of the gods                                                                                                            draw near them then in being merciful                                                                                                                will you show me some mercy                                                                                                                          sweet mercy is a nobility’s true badge                                                                                                              noble people like you have mercy                                                                                                                      thrice noble Titus spare my first – born son                                                                                                        please noble Titus spare my eldest son.

Titus Andronicus

patient yourself, madam, and pardon me                                                                                                           calm down madam and sorry                                                                                                                              these are their brethren whom you Goths beheld                                                                                               these are our brothers who you killed                                                                                                                   alive and dead and for their brethren slain                                                                                                            alive or dead and for those who you killed                                                                                                           religiously they ask a sacrifice                                                                                                                               our religion asks for sacrifices                                                                                                                               to this your son is mark’d and die he must                                                                                                             your son will die as a offering to the gods                                                                                                             to appease their groaning shadows that are gone                                                                                                 to make the dead happy

 

Sir

Sir, I am terribly sorry but I was not able to complete the paragraph due to the fact that I have no understanding of it. Please can I speak to you in form about maybe doing it during the 10 – 15 silent reading at the start of the lesson.

Albion

Act 1 Scene 1 Summary Part 2

Titus Andronicus

Setting:

Rome, Italy outside the tomb

Characters:

Captain                                                                                                                                                                   Titus Andronicus                                                                                                                                                   Lucius                                                                                                                                                                   Tamora                                                                                                                                                                 Chiron                                                                                                                                                               Demetrius

Events:

Titus Andronicus returns from the battle against the Goths with 2 prisoners the queen Tamora and her son Alarbus. He is standing outside a tomb where he will place yet another son. Lucius asks to burn Tamora’s son as a tribute/ritual to the Gods. This includes cutting limb by limb off and then the skin and then burn the rest of it. Tamora’s then tries to persuade Titus to change his mind about it to say you have been in this position many times before so don’t break my heart as well. Titus ignores her outcry and goes ahead with it. In the end he places the coffin with his son in the tomb.

Themes:

I think the theme of revenge is the main theme throughout this part.

Quotations:

Titus, unkind and careless of thine own, why suffer’st thou thy sons, unburied yet, to hover on the dreadful shore of Styx?

Explanation:

This quote suggests to me that Shakespeare is asking Titus Andronicus how many more sons will you have to lose in battle. However, he is getting older and therefore is not able to make any more sons so he might eventually end up with no sons. This language feature is a rhetorical question and is designed to put a different thought into our heads as the reader.

Act 1 Scene 1 Summary Part 1

Titus Andronicus

Setting:

Rome, before the Capitol

Characters:

Saturninus, son of dead emperor, older.     Bassianus, son of dead emperor, younger.                                                           Marcus Andronicus, brother of Titus Andronicus.

Events: 

Bassianus and Saturninus, both son of the emperor that died, are bickering over who should become the new emperor. Bassianus says that because he is older by rights he should be the new emperor. Bassianus suggests that he is a better leader and can lead Rome to better places than maybe Saturninus. However, Marcus Andronicus comes out and says that the final decision is that Titus Andronicus will become the new emperor because he is a noble and brave warrior and will make Rome a better place.

Themes:

The theme is mainly competitiveness as the sons of the emperor are trying to earn their right to the throne.

Quotation:

Marcus Andronicus, so I do ally.                 How fair the tribune speaks to calm my thoughts.

Explanation:

I have picked these quotes because Saturninus and Bassianus shows their almost recognition to the decision made. Inspite of the fact that the person picked to be future emperor not being in Rome they still accept the decision and with no retaliation offer their true support to Titus Andronicus.

 

 

 

 

 

My Own Elegy

Please, please just listen to me

I have something important to say to you

I will always will be

With you like the colour blue

 

We may not be together physically

But we always will be with emotions

This might be quizzically

But we aren’t just a drop in the ocean

 

I know your heart was broken

The day it was over

I mostly miss the practical jokes

But hated the snow in late October

 

Please, please listen to me

I have something to say however

I loved when we were at sea

I will be with you FOREVER!!!!!!!!!

Comparative Essay: How is the mind presented in English Literature?

I believe that English Literature has presented mental health as a weakness in your armoury and once you have depression, madness and other mental disorders that there is no way back. English Literature also believe there is no recovery phase and it will be with you forever.

In the poem Medusa, Carol Ann Duffy presents Medusa as jealous by using metaphors and similes to describe that she is in doubt and feeling unloved. “With a shield for a heart and a sword for a tongue” suggests that she is feeling physically and emotionally unwanted. Instead of coming to her the person might betray her and go and look elsewhere. She is just like a human but Duffy presents Medusa as if she is a monster, when actually she is just a human being feeling emotionally vulnerable.

In the poem Mental Cases, Wilfred Owen uses similar metaphors and similes to describe the mental state of the soldiers throughout. Wilfred Owen has picked out the fact that due to the war they are emotionally quite weak. Instead of making them feel good about themselves he objectifies the soldiers. He has dehumanised every single one of the weak soldiers. He does this by calling the soldiers “they”, “them” and “their” etc. This quote suggests to me that Wilfred Owen believes that the soldiers are no longer human. Furthermore, the quote ‘Therefore still their eyeballs shrink tormented’ is a metaphor. This suggests to me that they are afraid of seeing the world because they think that everything else is the same as the bad memories that they’ve experienced at war. This poet has therefore exploited the difficulty that the soldiers are experiencing.

Carol Ann Duffy introduces Medusa as someone who is human and has feelings unlike what English Literature has portrayed her as. She shows her thoughts and feelings throughout the poem but I think the quotation which stands out head and shoulders above all the others is “It’s you I love, perfect man”. This suggests to me that Carol Ann Duffy has gone really deep down inside the soul of Medusa and found what is clearly evident that she is no longer a monster but has a human side within her.

However, the flip side to this is that due to her love for this man and the lack of self-confidence that she shows “but I know you’ll go” which characterises the unsureness of her mental state perfectly. This suggests to me that psychologically she thinks that he will go and look for the attention elsewhere where she would have given him when she was younger. This will affect our understanding of the mind in English Literature by suggesting that her love could be a weakness as well as a strength.

Wilfred Owen in “Mental Cases” has taken the deep, vivid and horrible images that the soldiers have witnessed using metaphors to show that the soldiers are being dragged further and further into a black hole and there is no way of correcting it. I think the weakness of the soldiers is summed up when it says “These are men whose minds the dead have ravished”. This quote theorises that the mind of those who have fought throughout the war is weakening and I believe this poem is a wakeup call to the future soldiers who come to the ward to not be dragged down the same route. This affects our understanding of the mind in English Literature by suggesting that the soldiers are dying mentally as well as physically.

Moreover, Wilfred uses biblical language to affect our views of the mental effects of war on the soldiers. “Purgatorial Shadows” suggests to me that the soldiers are not in the correct state of mind to go back home or continue battling. Furthermore, they are not being helped by the extremely poor recovery conditions and has put them slightly in a disadvantage. Therefore, they are weak and losing their battle for survival mentally as well as physically. This affects our understanding of the mind in English Literature by suggesting that they are not fit to go on as they are mentally destroyed.

Throughout my essay, I have explored how “Medusa” by Carol Ann Duffy and “Mental Cases” by Wilfred Owen shows the Mental Health issues that are around in today’s society. Carol Ann Duffy uses Medusa’s jealousy as a sign of depression. Furthermore, Wilfred Owen uses the terrible mental state of the soldiers past to show the deep trouble they’re in as a result of the extremely poor conditions there was during World War I. English Literature has presented the mind as a weakness in your armoury and will continue to do so even in today’s society. I believe that we still might not have enough information to describe in depth what mental health actually is.

Which Love?

Sonnet 2: 

The love that is presented in Sonnet 2 is young love. Young love is portrayed by suggesting that ‘When forty winters shall besiege thy brow’. This would suggest to me that we’ve got all the time in the world to enjoy each others company and be free. He uses this metaphor to show that no matter how many years will go by you beauty will remain the same.

Sonnet 18:

Also in Sonnet 18 the love shown is relatively young. It is shown by suggesting ‘Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day. Thou art more lovely and more temperate’. This suggests to me that there is no need to compare you to a wonderful day because you are more beautiful than a wonderful day. He uses similes to show that it is impossible to compare you because you are much better.

Sonnet 73:

However, in Sonnet 73 the the type of relationship is old but not very old love. ‘When yellow leaves, or none, or few, do hang’. This quote suggests to me that when autumn comes you become old but there is always spring and summer to come and you will be looking nice and beautiful. He uses this metaphor to show that you are getting old in the autumn and winter but when it comes spring and summer you will be beautiful again.

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