Please, please just listen to me
I have something important to say to you
I will always will be
With you like the colour blue
We may not be together physically
But we always will be with emotions
This might be quizzically
But we aren’t just a drop in the ocean
I know your heart was broken
The day it was over
I mostly miss the practical jokes
But hated the snow in late October
Please, please listen to me
I have something to say however
I loved when we were at sea
I will be with you FOREVER!!!!!!!!!
October 12, 2013 at 12:50 pm
Harry, it’s great to see you completing your work on here. You’ve managed, in very few words, to record all of the key events in this scene. I’m impressed.
Next focus for you is attention to detail. Names always have a capital letter – and if you’re copying a quotation from the text, take extra care to copy it accurately.
Welcome to the world of Edutronic!
Mr Waugh
November 18, 2013 at 10:57 pm
Your summaries are improving in their detail, and it’s great to see you selecting relevant quotations. Next you should explain what the quotations mean and if you can detect some language features in these quotations, you should explain them.
You can always look at my guide to metaphors on the class site here if you need some help with that. http://waugh9.edutronic.net/fate-free-will-figurative-language/