Sir, I am terribly sorry but I was not able to complete the paragraph due to the fact that I have no understanding of it. Please can I speak to you in form about maybe doing it during the 10 – 15 silent reading at the start of the lesson.
Albion
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May 13, 2014 at 10:04 pm
Good use of rhetorical question in your opening sentence. You have also added a few plausible arguments for why mobile phones should be allowed in schools, however, I feel that your arguments are far too few to make an impact or to persuade someone take your side. You need to add more arguments and use more persuasive techniques to do this. You many also bring the opposing argument ,but then counter it with your own stronger points use of language devices. Very well done, nice work.